Jan 06

Complete the thought – Ominous

Complete the thought:

“A loud noise woke me up abruptly in the middle of the night. I peered out of the window, saw an ominous sky and thought…”

2 comments

    • Dre Rosier on January 12, 2018 at 12:36 pm

    This is eerie. Where have all the noises of the night gone? Normally, the crickets would chirp endlessly in their midnight melody in duet with the frogs, but not tonight…Why is this different? I feel this sensation that something is coming and that I shouldn’t be here right now. Against my better judgment, I stay and face the hazy sky with nothing but a bit of panic and a slight case of goosebumps. Bang! I hear it again and turn toward the noise in fear of the worst! I grab my flashlight out of my drawer next to the bed, and head for my bedroom door. When I extend my hand toward the knob, it slowly turns on it’s own to my own great fear! I hit the deck and turn off my flashlight but not before it betrays my presence with a loud thud on the floor and shining its electric beam under the door – four feet! Oh, no! What sort of creature is THAT??!! Swoosh! The door flies open and to my absolute shock and surprise!!….Old Aunt Gertrude and Uncle Melvin standing there with big smiles holding a bowl of popcorn with Teletubbies On Ice on dvd. I haven’t like that show since I was 6….I really hate when my parents go outta town.

      • bw8lmw96 on January 12, 2018 at 6:10 pm
        Author

      You have such a great imagination.
      Thanks for your comment.

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